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[afterparty]

I LOVE THIS!!!

[This Romantic World Page 359]

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I really chuckle at the juxtaposition of Morgan being a sub when she's by far one of the most aggressive and volatile characters.

Also, I expected more fallout for Elianna, but that turned out very well. *Phew*

Reinbach-Art responds:

Ah thanks for the heads up, actually. Looks liked I posted an older draft by accident here. Fixed! :)

[Lira’s Staff]

And this is that moment where Jack's asking himself, "Who have I been sticking it into and do I feel safe doing it anymore?"

[Trying to get those numbers up]

.... oh God...

[Remember kids...]

In a lot of ways I agree with this, but my fear is that live too close to this mindset we get to the point where writers have to hold our hands like illiterate babies, and sucking the magic out of storytelling. Like, Disney's Beauty and the Beast, there's a large hatedom that among other things, didn't understand or straight-up rejected the film's deliberate use of fairytale logic that often ignores continuity and practical explanations. It's okay if you're not into that, but it became cool to think that that kind of writing is objectively bad and it's not.

Edit: reading your reply, I absolutely understand what you're saying and why. I would say the same if it was happening to my fiction. I read your description, but I didn't realize the context behind this post. Hope my comment didn't add to any annoyance.

OneGrumpyLumpy responds:

I'm just trying to stop people misinterpreting BE because I drew/said something years ago that doesn't line up with the series in its current form (yes this is something I have to deal with).
Rewrites happen. Not every character I've ever drawn is going to make an appearance. Throwaway posts on twitter have no bearing on the actual story. If it's not in the text, it's not canon.
I don't care for holding anyone's hand.

[Wandering Swordsmoth]

That's the coolest thing I've ever seen in my life.

Okay, that's a hyperbole, but it is awesome and I love it.

Chorilate responds:

Thanks! maybe not the coolest thing in your life but I bet it was the coolest thing you saw in the mmh 10~20ish seconds window you saw it while writing this!!

[Big Dum-Dums]

Hahaha XD

[Spiderlily [Commission]]

This is exactly what I imagine she looks like when typing out her videos :)

[She’s Has Tits]

Yes. Yes you do.